On Plattform 9 3/4
Joined: 12 Oct 2009
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| I was reading this for the first time and I came across a small typo error. Nothing major or anything just thought Id let ya know. Now I have this pulled up in Adobe reader and it says page 123 but its at James' quiditch tryout. James felt his stomach plummet. He had hoped to spend some time watching the older students practice. Now that he was about to climb onto his first broom, he wished he had paid more attention to how the players handled them during the matches he’d been t, rather than looking for the spectacular stunts and messiest Bludger hits. The other first years were already moving forward, picking brooms and holding out their hands to summon them. James forced himself to join them." just left out the O in to when its talkin about the matches hes been too. I do have to say I love this book so far and cant wait for my copy to come in the mail. U are truly a great writer. Cant wait to finish this one and read part two |
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